PLACES IN THE WORLD:
DISNEY
DISNEY is very cool, nice, super and it has a lot of parks in it.
The 3 things that I like the most are :
- Sea world :is a super park. it has real wheels , water roll and coasters, there is Shamu: a beautiful wheel. It has black and white, I love it, and more.
- Magic kingdom is a super park, it has a lot of super games, thera are all the princess and a lot of super shoes, I love all the roll and coasters that are there, and more.
- Animal kingdom:there is a show of the Lion king , Everest mountain , a lot of animals and The Everesst mountain (a roll and casters), and more.
Disney is lo max! I love it, there are Micki Mouse, Minni and all their friends.
There are a lot of games but the one that I like the most is:the roller coasters.
WOW!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
I hope in some time I go to there, but the thing is that the flight is about five hours, then for going to Disney I do all..................
There you can see some shows and you feel they are real because there, they make all the movements and all, to feel it is real.......................It is 
super
I HOPE YOU GO THERE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
BYE......................................
I LOVE YOU
4 comments:
Mari:
I read youre article I also did it of disney but youre article is very very nice is very compleate bue I think you can compleated a little more the part of the parks you can compleatd a little more but I also LOVEW dISNEY!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!bYE
I like very much Disney parks too, Sea World is not a Disney park, you had many many many spelling mistakes like Mki instead of Mickey and Minni instead of Minnie and some others, your text is very short and ypur letter is very big.
dear mari:
I like very much your article but the letter is so light you have many sp ang gc.
I love disney parks to and your test is very short
it is important that you revice the article before you publish them
good job
.................bye...............
I love u
Hi I read your article I like it very much and I also think that Disney is a very good park, you have some spelling mistakes, I also like the parks you are talking about.
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